Something I've been playing with -- a story in poems. Here's the first one. Others to follow.
Nights
Both George and Ivan
long for adventure, a path
to divine freedom.
They just don’t know where it is.
Tonight they slump on
the hood of George’s old, green
gas-guzzler Lois,
a 57 Chevy
with white sidewalls and
leatherette steering wheel
cover. The sky is
clear and country road black. Mars
is so red it glows
like a mad, baleful eye,
and maybe that’s a
comet, the kind you wish on.
“I’m going places,:
says George. Ivan’s heard it all
before. George says he’s
going places, but he still
works at Popo’s car
wash, still comes home every night
damp, with soap in his
shoes. Ivan points to the tail
of the comet with
his beer can, taps his fingers
on Lois’ warm
hood, says, “Did you use it? Did
you wish?” And George says
“Of course I did. I told you.
I’m going places.”
For one sharp minute Ivan
believes. They stare at
the sky and imagine France,
the coast of Peru,
the length of the Amazon.
Then Ivan laughs, gulps
his beer, drops his head against
Lois’ windshield.
“Sure George.” “Sure Ivan,”
George echoes, and the
boys settle in to see who
Can stay awake till
dawn.
Nights
Both George and Ivan
long for adventure, a path
to divine freedom.
They just don’t know where it is.
Tonight they slump on
the hood of George’s old, green
gas-guzzler Lois,
a 57 Chevy
with white sidewalls and
leatherette steering wheel
cover. The sky is
clear and country road black. Mars
is so red it glows
like a mad, baleful eye,
and maybe that’s a
comet, the kind you wish on.
“I’m going places,:
says George. Ivan’s heard it all
before. George says he’s
going places, but he still
works at Popo’s car
wash, still comes home every night
damp, with soap in his
shoes. Ivan points to the tail
of the comet with
his beer can, taps his fingers
on Lois’ warm
hood, says, “Did you use it? Did
you wish?” And George says
“Of course I did. I told you.
I’m going places.”
For one sharp minute Ivan
believes. They stare at
the sky and imagine France,
the coast of Peru,
the length of the Amazon.
Then Ivan laughs, gulps
his beer, drops his head against
Lois’ windshield.
“Sure George.” “Sure Ivan,”
George echoes, and the
boys settle in to see who
Can stay awake till
dawn.